請英文高手幫我改改完美一下，謝謝。

A cool summer night in London, I woke up and wrote to you
I could walk on the street naked thinking of you wanting me...
You say, don't be too naked it's cold there
Then I saw a fox crossing the street, disappeared
Into woods in the central London
I wonder if it is just lust like the summer haze

You are fading away, but still
I see you sitting on a bench at Parnassus
I hear you talking inside Moffitt
I feel you touching my perfect body with your mind
But I've never dreamed of you
I just wake up and write to you

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• 小謀，真是久違了，問好。 -斕婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:37:35

• 謝謝，慚愧，好久沒來，學習huangfei -小謀- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:40:26

• 真高興又見到小謀，有空就常來玩呀。 -斕婷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 09:43:00

• Anyone can make it flow like a song? -小謀- ♀ (4 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 13:00:51

• In London, at a cool summer night ... -lucidus- ♂ (18154 bytes) () 07/16/2013 postreply 13:57:21

• 堅持用你學到的口語。勇敢一點。不要被語法規則絆倒。 -SanGabriel- ♀ (408 bytes) () 07/17/2013 postreply 08:58:58

• 謝各位鼎力支持，我想對其中幾點做些解釋和補充一點背景說明。:-) -小謀- ♀ (805 bytes) () 07/17/2013 postreply 21:00:12

• Then keep what he said. And the bit of teasing in it. -SanGabriel- ♀ (1087 bytes) () 07/18/2013 postreply 00:19:51

• this is what he replied me...It's a song lyrics.. -小謀- ♀ (1017 bytes) () 07/22/2013 postreply 14:00:48