堅持用你學到的口語。勇敢一點。不要被語法規則絆倒。

來源: SanGabriel 於 2013-07-17 08:58:58 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (408 bytes)
回答: 請英文高手幫我改改完美一下，謝謝。 由 小謀 於 2013-07-16 09:26:34

I wake up in a cool summer night in London and want to write to you
I walk on the street naked, thinking that you may want me
You say, don't be naked it's too cold out there
Then I see a fox running across the street, disappearing
...
I feel you touching me, my body is feeling your mind
But I never dream of you
I just wake up and start writing to you

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