莎士比亞《Venus and Adonis》翻譯 - 027

'Is thine own heart to thine own face affected?

Can thy right hand seize love upon thy left?

Then woo thyself, be of thyself rejected,

Steal thine own freedom and complain on theft.

Narcissus so himself himself forsook,

And died to kiss his shadow in the brook.

 

“心有所思麵難掩？ 

  左手應感右手情？

  人不厭君君自厭，

  朗又掩耳又盜玲。

  美男自戀猶自棄，

   影人自慻招自溺”

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• Narcissus so himself himself forsook,兩個himself如何理解？謝DN老師！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 17:09:35

• 回複：莎士比亞《Venus and Adonis》翻譯 - 027 -bmdn- ♀ (160 bytes) () 08/27/2012 postreply 18:23:17

• I appreciate your explanation and I will keep following your pos -sportwoman- ♀ (161 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 05:31:52

• to ...affected: in love with your own face -yuanxiang- ♂ (611 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 08:49:32

• 回複：thanks for pointing this out. I think I need to change my tra -bmdn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 09:10:03

• You're Welcome. Just for your reference. -yuanxiang- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 09:23:45

• 更改過的翻譯。謝謝！ -bmdn- ♀ (1999 bytes) () 08/29/2012 postreply 18:34:01

• 跟著大牛，翻著書，查著字典學莎士比亞 -onceuponatime- ♀ (872 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 13:20:59

• 這個我好喜歡。老萬功課做得好啊。我們老懶跟著沾光了：） -tern2- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 16:15:25

• 老萬挺好聽。以前 -onceuponatime- ♀ (12 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 18:19:36

• 那還真不能叫你老萬呢， -tern2- ♀ (47 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 19:09:40

• hahaha 不叫老熊也會老：）可能老的更快：） -onceuponatime- ♀ (39 bytes) () 08/28/2012 postreply 20:46:53