thank you tingfeng! I should mind the tenses and grammar

"his impatience makes no sense"---is not what i mean.What I was trying to say is that the deal doesn't make sense, not his impatience.

 

Biased ---I think there is no need to say the conclusion is "biased", because i supposed that my audience are not that stupid (kidding) and they can tell that is biased or even prjudiced, so  that is why I said I 'd better wear a 防蛋背心 when i do this speech. 

Thank you for your time and I appreciate that if you could hightlight the parts you corrected/modified. Thank you again tingfeng I've learned a lot from you! 

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• it is an excuse to protect yourself -tingfeng- ♀ (558 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 10:57:34

• now i am confused that I am not sure if you undersood what I j -sportwoman- ♀ (379 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:21:28

• sorry to interfere your thoughts. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:36:48

• oh, no need to say sorry, but there is a need for me to -sportwoman- ♀ (149 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:49:02

• be proactive -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:56:53

• I seldom do speech on negative stuff. -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:58:45

• i dont need to protect myself, because they have no chance to as -sportwoman- ♀ (388 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:43:49

• in the purpose of impressing others, you are absolutely right. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:48:21

• thank you! -sportwoman- ♀ (51 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:53:07

• I am observing as well, sunny! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:56:25

• Actually we both are being observed, These days -sportwoman- ♀ (342 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:14:22

• haha...we are. What to share, I have no idea... hints? -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:19:26

• you are an attractive girl, I am all ears for your stories. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:22:53

• i hope so but they said my figure looks -sportwoman- ♀ (61 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:33:18

• well, 穿越到唐朝吧! -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:42:43

• still people believe inner beauty is important. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:44:07

• Very nice to chat with you professor Windy! -sportwoman- ♀ (85 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 12:53:17

• I've learned a lot as well, bye, Sunny. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 13:09:52

• I will make sure I use track change next time. -tingfeng- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/30/2012 postreply 11:06:10