Like your diary!

 

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"?

- brought me -> brought to me (not sure)

- chat -> chatted

- my chocolate are all gone -> my chocolate is all gone (not sure)

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• 多謝指正！我的措辭比較口語化。 -sportwoman- ♀ (878 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:55:55

• 表達得不夠嚴謹，還望多多指正！多謝！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:59:44