多謝指正！我的措辭比較口語化。

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"? 直接從巧克力盒子上的描述。I think you are right using jelly-covered in a formal manner.

I had many sleepless nights like yours.

- would "jelly-covered" be better than "jellies covered"?

- brought me -> brought to me (not sure) 口語化

- chat -> chatted 對的

- my chocolate are all gone -> my chocolate is all gone (not sure)。好的

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• 表達得不夠嚴謹，還望多多指正！多謝！ -sportwoman- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/08/2012 postreply 04:59:44