請老師們幫忙改改這句話好麽？有必要改麽？

He wondered how it was that the impressions of winter could so completely describe the way he perceived himself--small beneath a threatening sky,and surrounded everywhere by the white silence of nothing but space.

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• 回複：請老師們幫忙改改這句話好麽？有必要改麽？ -EnLearner- ♀ (379 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:18:53

• 謝謝。 -hry- ♀ (109 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:31:40

• 不用謝。 -EnLearner- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:37:24

• 剛剛路過這兒。昨天在職場睡著了 -路過這兒- ♀ (325 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 10:06:06

• 謝謝路過！你的解釋很講得通。 -hry- ♀ (291 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 11:04:48

• 謝謝你接受我的嚐試。語言是為人民服務的，人民不是為語言服務的， 哈 -路過這兒- ♀ (201 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 11:56:56

• hahaha, 看了。 -hry- ♀ (437 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 12:47:15

• 厲害，厲害：）我聽說過magi那篇很著名。 -路過這兒- ♀ (119 bytes) () 11/13/2011 postreply 13:05:54

• 謝姐姐（＾Ｏ＾☆♪ -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/16/2011 postreply 10:31:02