回複：請老師們幫忙改改這句話好麽？有必要改麽？

 

不是老師。你寫的嗎？你看這樣好一點嗎？

He wondered how it was that the impressions of winter could so completely describe the way he perceived himself--small beneath a threatening sky,and surrounded everywhere by the white silence of nothing but space.

 

 

 

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• 謝謝。 -hry- ♀ (109 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:31:40

• 不用謝。 -EnLearner- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/12/2011 postreply 15:37:24