謝謝班長這麽忙，還幫俺看文，敬禮

冤枉呀上次被MM你罵了以後，都老實多了，沒敢再亂用詞 :D

(1) her heart sagged. 我從沒聽到過sag這樣用的，what's wrong with sank?

>> I learned this word from a short story by Ha Jin

原句: “My heart sagged as I lay back in the seat to take a nap.”

心往下沉，因為不高興或擔憂什麽的 

(2) But as a self-claimed amateur artist with good looks, ->self-acclaimed?

>>self-claimed -自稱，自封，說這個男的有點自以為是

e.g. B. Howard "The Self-Claimed Prince of Pop" Arrives In Japan

自稱是流行音樂王子

（3）One day, suddenly he didn’t reply her emails any more and he no longer visited the photography forum. 我會直接說： One day, he stopped replying her emails and visiting the photogrphy forum.

>>好象我的是羅嗦了點

（4）two my best pieces I wanna share with you. two of my best pieces
>>這點是有問題，我想表達，最好的兩件作品，而不是最好的作品中的兩件

改成：”my two best pieces” instead of “two my best pieces”?

最後情節上，我有點不明白為啥also for the very last time in her whole life? 她沒有自殺吧？還是她決定再也不看雪了？
>>應該是沒死，因為不是黛玉，是再也沒有去北方看雪

 

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• 恩，我跟你悄悄說，別讓Carpediem和其他哈金的粉絲聽到哈 -非文學青年- ♀ (403 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:18:07

• 哈哈~ -lilac09- ♀ (1624 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:54:27

• 哦，好像是。 -非文學青年- ♀ (184 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 15:32:04