不是當外人,這兩天工作上忙了點兒。挑了幾顆磚

回答: 完了完了,幾天不來,就被當外人了~~lilac092011-09-19 18:08:51

寫得非常好!I like it very much!

我用詞conservative,我沒見過的不敢用,我覺得你就有點兒太膽大了,哈哈,we need to find a middle ground.

(1) her heart sagged. 我從沒聽到過sag這樣用的,what's wrong with sank?

(2) But as a self-claimed amateur artist with good looks, ->self-acclaimed?

(3)One day, suddenly he didn’t reply her emails any more and he no longer visited the photography forum. 我會直接說: One day, he stopped replying her emails and visiting the photogrphy forum.

(4)two my best pieces I wanna share with you. two of my best pieces

最後情節上,我有點不明白為啥also for the very last time in her whole life? 她沒有自殺吧?還是她決定再也不看雪了?

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謝謝班長這麽忙,還幫俺看文,敬禮 -lilac09- 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (10103 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 12:47:21

恩,我跟你悄悄說,別讓Carpediem和其他哈金的粉絲聽到哈 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (403 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:18:07

哈哈~ -lilac09- 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (1624 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 14:54:27

哦,好像是。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (184 bytes) () 09/20/2011 postreply 15:32:04

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