剛才出門去了。

是的,it will be much better if you put "instead of xx" in paraphasis.

The original author's structure is better because it is more clear.

如果一兩塊薄磚就讓你停止Post Writing，那我更懷疑你最初要磚的誠意LA.

不過我不擔心你不再POST,because you will:)

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• 你小子看透我了！哈哈 -非文學青年- ♀ (813 bytes) () 08/13/2011 postreply 14:32:52