剛才出門去了。

來源: 2011-08-13 13:28:18 [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀:

是的,it will be much better if you put "instead of xx" in paraphasis.

The original author's structure is better because it is more clear.

如果一兩塊薄磚就讓你停止Post Writing,那我更懷疑你最初要磚的誠意LA.

不過我不擔心你不再POST,because you will:)