Ah, here we go again!

I will try to read it. Haven't read for a while, the self-awareness is strong.

I accepted most of your corrections as usual. Bummer! Haha.

About the dinner, should it be plural since I was a regular?

self-conciousness is 是在熱鬧的餐館被暗示到自己隻身一人的自我意識...我就執迷不悟，不改了。

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• ok, convinced about the self-conciousness sentence now. -非文學青年- ♀ (452 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 13:39:09

• 往前翻了幾頁，文青你的party文寫的很棒，有一個詞 -lilac09- ♀ (34 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 14:39:54

• Cool word! thanks a lot, Lilac! -非文學青年- ♀ (91 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 21:57:02

• 也有道理~~ -lilac09- ♀ (178 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 06:22:08

• Good suggestion! -非文學青年- ♀ (101 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 08:57:37

• 怕mm誤會，跑到老電腦上用中文回一下，英文不給力。 -非文學青年- ♀ (119 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 10:24:54

• 哈哈~ MM想多了，沒有誤會的說 -lilac09- ♀ (647 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 14:11:24

• 文青沒想多，是俺想多了。好，期待好文。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 16:04:54

• CO:期待好文 -非文學青年- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/07/2011 postreply 16:38:44

• Ms. Perfectionist, I've updated it as you suggested... again:) -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/06/2011 postreply 17:47:25