Without a birth certificate of a native speaker,

I cannot make myself seem untouchable or invincible. Darn! And so I am all ears for any criticism on both languages.

I have revised it. Please read before you launch the offense:)

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• hehe, take offense please, pun intended. -非文學青年- ♀ (735 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 10:19:13

• another irony is that I made a mistake there: become->became/bec -非文學青年- ♀ (29 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 10:30:30

• Ah~ Cannot beat an genuine English major -carpediem- ♂ (528 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 12:53:02

• I wish I can write so passionately and powerfully! -非文學青年- ♀ (296 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 14:04:07

• Being passionate about something -carpediem- ♂ (133 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 15:07:16

• oh, in that case, I think I would use: -非文學青年- ♀ (203 bytes) () 07/28/2011 postreply 17:30:10