my dictation homework, based on BW's

The first snow came. How beautiful it was! Falling so silently all day long all night long on the mountains, on the meadows, on the roofs of the living, on the graves of the dead. All white,  saved the river that marked its course by a winding black lines across the landscape. And the leafless trees that against the leaden sky now reviewed more flee fully the wonderful beauty and the intregacy intricacy of their branches. What silent silence too came with the snow and what was the conclusion, every sound was muffled, every voice noice changed to something soft and musical, no more traveling tramping huffs horses?（查了字典知道是hoofs）, no more raveling rattling wheels, only the charming of the sleigh bells beating as swift and merrily as hearts of children.

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• lmao，大牛！Thanks! -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:01:55

• 不知道對不對，瞎改，上次就有一處給NewVoice改錯了。 -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:03:16

• 上次看了你的聽寫，又對照了原文，你的聽力也太牛了。估計老美都聽不了你這麽清楚。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (58 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:05:51

• oh, reviewed-->revealed -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:15:20

• 嗯，看了愚公的聽力作業後意識到了。 -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/11/2011 postreply 23:18:00

• conclusion->seclusion. -lmao- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 09:26:08

• 這才是精益求精啊。 -EnLearner- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 20:05:52

• 當時就覺得這個詞聽得不對。可又不知道該是啥。怎一個“牛”字了得！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2011 postreply 21:46:59