Usualy a foul night is not what I am fond of. The heavy rain w

Usualy  a foul night is not what I am  fond of. The heavy rain with high wind in a summer night makes me feel bad, adding an element of loneliness, creepiness, and isolation.

 But the rain and wind  under your writing is a fascinating exception.   The vivid description of  a series of movements and sounds performed by the nature is a masterpiece, creating a wonderful image of a lively rain and fall. This is the piece that will top all your other poems. do you think i am  exagerating??? :)))


你這篇寫的很棒！非常巧妙的把一副生動形象的風雨畫麵呈現在我們麵前。這些詞匯選的很妙，很有韻味，既增加了音韻美，又非常形象連貫，讀起來節奏感很強， 很有美感。。。

最後又動到靜的轉換， 由物到人的轉換，意境上得到了升華。

it is another masterpiece.

所有跟帖： 

• you write very well. -veryfar- ♀ (422 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 15:22:31

• Wind and rain raging outside -tern2- ♀ (159 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:29:49

• 你真是大高手 -veryfar- ♀ (183 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 21:33:32

• 我來翻 -follower- ♀ (131 bytes) () 07/06/2011 postreply 22:33:39

• 高翻啊高翻！ -tern2- ♀ (348 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:07:22

• 是你的詩寫的妙 -follower- ♀ (17 bytes) () 07/07/2011 postreply 06:56:26