美風辛苦了! Just a few minor ones:

回答: 【翻譯寫作】練習之六--我的作業beautifulwind2011-06-29 18:55:26

1. embedded - I like this. So far I have seen "embedded", "ingrained","distilled", "rooted" - all the wonderful words. I learned a lot.

2. lookings - looks or appearances

3. elderly - elderly people (elderly is not a noun).

4. yellow outside but white inside - yellow on the outside but white on the inside (in English writing)

5. his everything - everything about him

6. prejudice to evey race - racial prejudice (this is better)

7. asian -Asian (to be on the safe side)

 

 

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都是金磚!謝謝! 這樣太學東西了!!! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/29/2011 postreply 20:26:47

she made the same mistake as you, NewVoice, twice. although...bu -lmao- 給 lmao 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/29/2011 postreply 21:26:07

謝謝,禮貌!大家都給了我這塊磚,該記住了! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/29/2011 postreply 21:52:18

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