美風辛苦了! Just a few minor ones:

1. embedded - I like this. So far I have seen "embedded", "ingrained","distilled", "rooted" - all the wonderful words. I learned a lot.

2. lookings - looks or appearances

3. elderly - elderly people (elderly is not a noun).

4. yellow outside but white inside - yellow on the outside but white on the inside (in English writing)

5. his everything - everything about him

6. prejudice to evey race - racial prejudice (this is better)

7. asian -Asian (to be on the safe side)