給張小姐的回覆並附上修改好的文章。下不為例！

我剛出差回到家，已是淩晨四時多了，不好意思晚了回覆你的悄悄話來信，敬請您多谘詢美壇的大哥和大姐意見。

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冒昧大蝦幫忙，急用，無限感激
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早年畢業於中國人民大學繪畫及廣告設計，後到美國州伯克利學院深造。從事藝術教育工作至今已有十七年，並於工餘時間作多媒介創作及近年研習油畫。作品多以描繪生活的曆驗，舒發喜，怒，哀，樂的感受和夢想追尋。

Graduated from Professional Studies of Renmin University of China, major in Graphic Design, Later, she moved to US and continuing study at Berkeley College. She work in Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching & Learning for more than 17 years and continuing shows the way and strategies for the enforcement of artistic education. Besides teacher, miss Zhang commits herself to oil paintings and on Advertising creation, also probed into the idea of multimedia creation and has many remarkable outcome. Her most works of excellence was in the experience of living, express the thoughts and feelings. The joys and sorrows of the common people are her themes.
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我給您的修改如下：

Miss Zhang graduated from People’s University of China, majoring in graphics design and advertising. Later on, she attended Berkeley College where she studied contemporary art. She has worked with Aesthetic Education and Art Creation Teaching and Learning for more than 17 years, and she continues to show enthusiasm in her job. Outside of being a teacher, Zhang really enjoys oil painting and multimedia graphics design. Her work is most memorable for their realistic portrayals of life. Zhang captures both the joys and sorrows of her subjects wonderfully as well as expression, captivating everyone that has seen her paintings.


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• 譯得好，謝分享，新周快樂。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 10:06:28

• 回複：給張小姐的回覆並附上修改好的文章。下不為例！ -北京二號- ♀ (2750 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 10:10:19

• 赫赫。除了二號，其它的日子如1.3.4.5.6.7...... -DrunkerKickass- ♂ (255 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 14:53:48

• 高山仰止 -北京二號- ♀ (345 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 15:08:29

• My two cents -carpediem- ♂ (9041 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 20:24:25

• 問好，學習了。 -北京二號- ♀ (28 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 20:54:35

• 向2姐學習！ -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 21:18:51

• Correction: a. The second “she” is redundant. -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 21:02:09

• Bro, let's get real -carpediem- ♂ (925 bytes) () 06/28/2011 postreply 20:15:10

• 關公啥時候把青龍偃月刀改鍘刀了 -lostman- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/30/2011 postreply 05:22:32