想應文青 or 熱青 writing 提議,based on Newton post

The writing exercise has stimulated great interest in this forum, as evidenced by the large number of comments followed. Therefore, this activity should be continued/resumed.

 

As most of you might have noticed, it requires a lot of energy/effort to provide critiques to each writing homework and at the same time, it is also very important for one to receive such critiques/comments for his/her homework in order to improve writing skills. Therefore I am proposing to post a paragraph of well-translated text in Chinese on the forum each Monday for us to translate it into English. On Fridays, the original work in English will be posted for us to compare with our own translation.

 

I happened to encounter an article titled “paper tiger” by Wesley Wang, published on a New York magazine, has generated great interests amongst Asian-American community.

 

 

newton post:

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The translation homework has exicted so many English learners' nerve and energy as is reflected in hot comments one after another. This activity should be resumed as it stimulates the practice of English much more strongly than any other exercise.

As you guys have already found that it requires a lot of energy to make corrections. Without corrections, one may feel lacking guide to the right direction. Here I propose to put a paragraph of well translated Chinese text on Monday on the website for us to do the translation, the original English will be added on Friday to compare.

I notice an artical titled "paper tiger" by Wesley Yang, published on New York magzine, caused great hit among Asian-American community.

 

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非常棒!小薇童鞋總是又快又好! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (215 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 21:02:35

還有一點:interest還是interests? 你寫的裏麵兩個都出現了。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/26/2011 postreply 21:20:41

嗯。謝謝文清。 這幾個的方是不妥 -同學小薇- 給 同學小薇 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:49:18

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About the last paragraph: -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (96 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 03:21:05

謝謝。我再想想 -同學小薇- 給 同學小薇 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:12

也響應號召,練一練。 -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (2035 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 03:28:04

Thank 同學小薇, NewVoice,...for your excellent work -newton123- 給 newton123 發送悄悄話 newton123 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:41

Great piece! -同學小薇- 給 同學小薇 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:54:41

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謝謝。給幾塊磚呀 -同學小薇- 給 同學小薇 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/27/2011 postreply 07:50:51

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