實驗證明，兒童在很小的時候就可以開始學習遊泳。在洛杉磯的一個特設的遊泳池裏，孩子們甚至在還沒有學會走路時就已經能熟練地在水下屏住呼吸了。兩個月的 嬰兒並未顯得不願意入水。他們很快便適應了遊泳，以致能撿起池底的物品。這些幼小的遊泳運動員非常喜愛的一種遊戲是水下三輪車比賽。三輪車並排放在7英尺 深的遊泳池底上。孩子們比賽看誰先到達遊泳池的另一端。很多孩子用腳蹬車，但多數孩子更願意推或是拉著三輪車。有些孩子能夠跑完遊泳池的全長而不用露出水 麵換氣。他們將來是否能成為奧林匹克的冠軍，這隻能由時間來作出回答。與此同時，他們對我們中的那些遊不了5碼就已喘不過氣來的人應該是種鼓舞。
原文：NCE II Lesson 94: Future champions
Experiments have proved that children can be instructed in swimming at a very early age. At a special swimming pool in Los Angeles, children become expert at holding their breath under water even before they can walk. Babies of two months old do not appear to be reluctant to enter the water. It is not long before they are so accustomed to swimming that they can pick up weights from the floor of the pool. A game that is very popular with these young swimmers is the underwater tricycle race. Tricycles are lined up on the floor of the pool seven feet under water. The children compete against each other to reach the other end of the pool. Many pedal their tricycles, but most of them prefer to push or drag them. Some children can cover the whole length of the pool without coming up for breath even once. Whether they will ever become future Olympic champions, only time will tell. Meanwhile, they should encourage those among us who cannot swim five yards before they are gasping for air.
Newton123
It has been proved by experiments that children are able to learn swimming at very early age. In a special swimming pool in Los Angles, infants have been able to hold breath under water before they can walk. The two-month infants show no sign of being unwilling in water. They adapt to swimming so quickly that they can pick up objects on the bottom of the pool. Their favorite sport is a tricycle race in water. Tricycles are set side by side on the bottom of swimming pool of seven feet deep. The one who first reaches the other end of the pool wins. Many kids pedal the tricycles whereas more prefer pushing or pulling the devices. Some of them have been able to cover the whole distance without lift（lifting） their head out of the water for breathing. Only may time answer if they become an Olympic champions in (the) future. They should be very encouraging for some of us who become out of breath in trying to swim the first five yards.
非文學青年
Experiments have shown that children can start learning to swim when they are very young. In a specially-designed swimming pool of Los Angeles, children that couldn’t walk yet held their breath under water with ease. Even two-month-old infants did not appear hesitant going into the water. They got used to swimming so fast as to pick up stuff from the pool bottom. One of the young swimmers’ favorite games was underwater tricycle race. Tricycles were lined up on the 7-foot-deep swimming pool bottom. The children competed to be the first to reach the other end of the pool. Many children paddled with their feet on the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull them. Some children could go the whole length without breathing out of the water. Only time can tell whether they could become an Olympic Champions or not. In the meanwhile, it should be an inspiration for those of us who can’t swim more than 5 yards without being out of breath.
美風
Experiments show that children may begin learning swimming at an early age. In a specific swimming pool in Los Angeles, children are able to skillfully hold their breath under the water even though they have not learned walking yet. Two months old babies(這個不是太確定，但覺得年齡做形容詞的時候應該：Two-month-old babies) do not show that they are reluctant to go into （the）water. They are used to swimming very soon, so that they may pick up stuff underneath the water. One of the little swimmers' most favorite games is the tricycle race underneath the water. The tricycles are lined in a row underneath of the 7- foot-depth swimming pool. It is to see who is going to reach the other end of the swimming pool first. Many children step into the tricycle, but most of the children either push or pull them. Some of the children can even finish running the whole length of the swimming pool without breathing above water. Whether they are able to win championship in the Olympics, it depends on the time to give an answer. In the meantime, they should be an inspiration to those who are unable to breath after swiming less than 5 feet.
美風：underneath和under的一點兒區別：我查了underneath：close under especially so as to be hidden underneath a mask of friendliness> underneath his slacks>
NewVoice
It has been proved experimentally that children can learn how to swim at young age. In a specially-designed swimming pool in Los Angeles, children could hold their breath skillfully before they learned how to walk. Two-month old babies did not show unwillingness to be in water, and they quickly learned swimming and could pick up the objects placed at the bottom of the pool. One of the favorable games of these young swimmers is underwater tricycle racing. Tricycles are placed in parallel 7 feet under the water. Children raced to see who would be the first to reach the other end. Many children paddled the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull their tricycles. Some of them raced the whole length without coming out of water to breathe. Only time will tell if they will become champions of Olympic Game. At mean time, they encourage us who are out of breath after swimming for less than 5 yards.
愚公
Experiments show that children can learn swimming at their very early age. In Los Ange, children even learn how to hold their breath effortlessly under water in a specially designed swiming pool. There is no sign that the two months old babies refuse to get into the water. They get used to swimming so soon that they are able to pick up things from the bottom of the pool. One of the games that these baby athelets enjoy very much is the under-water tricycle race. Tricycles are lined up at the bottom of a swiming pool of seven feet deep. The game is to see which baby will reach the other end of the pool first. Many of them pad the peddle with their feet. But most of them rather push or pull the tricycles. Some of the babies even can swming across the pool whihtout letting their face get out of the water to take a breath. Only time can tell whether they will be a future Olympic champion. Meanwhile, aren't they an inspiration for those of us who are out of breath just by swmming no more than five yards.
Experiments indicate that children can begin their swimming lessons at a very early age. In a specially designed swimming pool in Los Angles, children were able to skillfully hold their breath under water even while still unable to walk (or learning to walk). Two-month old babies did not seem to hesitate to enter（the） water. They adapted themselves to swimming so quickly that they could even pick up objects from the bottom of the pool. One of those little athletes' favorite games was the under-water tricycle competition. Tricycles were lined up on the bottom of this 7 foot deep pool. The children competed to see who would be the first one to reach the other side of the pool. Many children pedaled, but most would rather push or pull their tricycles. Some ran the entire length of the pool without getting above water to take a breath. Only time will reveal whether they will become Olympic champions. Meanwhile they should be inspirations to those of us who cannot swim 5 yards without catching their breath.
