【翻譯寫作】練習之四原文+匯總,歡迎大家探討

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實驗證明,兒童在很小的時候就可以開始學習遊泳。在洛杉磯的一個特設的遊泳池裏,孩子們甚至在還沒有學會走路時就已經能熟練地在水下屏住呼吸了。兩個月的 嬰兒並未顯得不願意入水。他們很快便適應了遊泳,以致能撿起池底的物品。這些幼小的遊泳運動員非常喜愛的一種遊戲是水下三輪車比賽。三輪車並排放在7英尺 深的遊泳池底上。孩子們比賽看誰先到達遊泳池的另一端。很多孩子用腳蹬車,但多數孩子更願意推或是拉著三輪車。有些孩子能夠跑完遊泳池的全長而不用露出水 麵換氣。他們將來是否能成為奧林匹克的冠軍,這隻能由時間來作出回答。與此同時,他們對我們中的那些遊不了5碼就已喘不過氣來的人應該是種鼓舞。


原文:NCE II Lesson 94: Future champions


Experiments have proved that children can be instructed in swimming at a very early age. At a special swimming pool in Los Angeles, children become expert at holding their breath under water even before they can walk. Babies of two months old do not appear to be reluctant to enter the water. It is not long before they are so accustomed to swimming that they can pick up weights from the floor of the pool. A game that is very popular with these young swimmers is the underwater tricycle race. Tricycles are lined up on the floor of the pool seven feet under water. The children compete against each other to reach the other end of the pool. Many pedal their tricycles, but most of them prefer to push or drag them. Some children can cover the whole length of the pool without coming up for breath even once. Whether they will ever become future Olympic champions, only time will tell. Meanwhile, they should encourage those among us who cannot swim five yards before they are gasping for air.


Newton123


It has been proved by experiments that children are able to learn swimming at  very early age. In a special swimming pool in Los Angles, infants have been able to hold breath under water before they can walk. The two-month infants show no sign of being unwilling in water. They adapt to swimming so quickly that they can pick up objects on the bottom of the pool. Their favorite sport is a tricycle race in water. Tricycles are set side by side on the bottom of swimming pool of seven feet deep. The one who first reaches the other end of the pool wins. Many kids pedal the tricycles whereas more prefer pushing or pulling the devices. Some of them have been able to cover the whole distance without lift(lifting) their head out of the water for breathing. Only may time answer if they become an Olympic champions in (the) future. They should be very encouraging for some of us who become out of breath in trying to swim the first five yards.


非文學青年


Experiments have shown that children can start learning to swim when they are very young. In a specially-designed swimming pool of Los Angeles, children that couldn’t walk yet held their breath under water with ease. Even two-month-old infants did not appear hesitant going into the water. They got used to swimming so fast as to pick up stuff from the pool bottom. One of the young swimmers’ favorite games was underwater tricycle race. Tricycles were lined up on the 7-foot-deep swimming pool bottom. The children competed to be the first to reach the other end of the pool. Many children paddled with their feet on the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull them. Some children could go the whole length without breathing out of the water. Only time can tell whether they could become an Olympic Champions or not. In the meanwhile, it should be an inspiration for those of us who can’t swim more than 5 yards without being out of breath.


美風


Experiments show that children may begin learning swimming at an early age. In a specific swimming pool in Los Angeles, children are able to skillfully hold their breath under the water even though they have not learned walking yet. Two months old babies(這個不是太確定,但覺得年齡做形容詞的時候應該:Two-month-old babies) do not show that they are reluctant to go into thewater. They are used to swimming very soon, so that they may pick up stuff underneath the water. One of the little swimmers' most favorite games is the tricycle race underneath the water. The tricycles are lined in a row underneath of the 7- foot-depth swimming pool. It is to see who is going to reach the other end of the swimming pool first. Many children step into the tricycle, but most of the children either push or pull them. Some of the children can even finish running the whole length of the swimming pool without breathing above water. Whether they are able to win championship in the Olympics, it depends on the time to give an answer. In the meantime, they should be an inspiration to those who are unable to breath after swiming less than 5 feet.


美風:underneathunder的一點兒區別:我查了underneathclose under especially so as to be hidden underneath a mask of friendliness> underneath his slacks>


NewVoice


It has been proved experimentally that children can learn how to swim at young age. In a specially-designed swimming pool in Los Angeles, children could hold their breath skillfully before they learned how to walk. Two-month old babies did not show unwillingness to be in water, and they quickly learned swimming and could pick up the objects placed at the bottom of the pool. One of the favorable games of these young swimmers is underwater tricycle racing. Tricycles are placed in parallel 7 feet under the water. Children raced to see who would be the first to reach the other end. Many children paddled the tricycles, but most of them liked to push or pull their tricycles. Some of them raced the whole length without coming out of water to breathe. Only time will tell if they will become champions of Olympic Game. At mean time, they encourage us who are out of breath after swimming for less than 5 yards.


 


愚公


Experiments show that children can learn swimming at their very early age.  In Los Ange, children even learn how to hold their breath effortlessly under water in a specially designed swiming pool. There is no sign that the two months old babies refuse to get into the water.  They get used to swimming so soon that they are able to pick up things from the bottom of the pool.  One of the games that these baby athelets enjoy very much is the under-water tricycle race.  Tricycles are lined up at the bottom of a swiming pool of seven feet deep.   The game is to see which baby will reach the other end of the pool first.  Many of them pad the peddle with their feet.  But most of  them rather push or pull the tricycles.  Some of the babies even can swming across the pool whihtout letting their face get out of the water to take a breath.   Only time can tell whether they will be a future Olympic champion.  Meanwhile, aren't they an inspiration for those of us who are out of breath just by swmming no more than five yards.


follower


Experiments indicate that children can begin their swimming lessons at a very early age. In a specially designed swimming pool in Los Angles, children were able to skillfully hold their breath under water even while still unable to walk (or learning to walk). Two-month old babies did not seem to hesitate to enterthe water. They adapted themselves to swimming so quickly that they could even pick up objects from the bottom of the pool. One of those little athletes' favorite games was the under-water tricycle competition. Tricycles were lined up on the bottom of this 7 foot deep pool. The children competed to see who would be the first one to reach the other side of the pool. Many children pedaled, but most would rather push or pull their tricycles. Some ran the entire length of the pool without getting above water to take a breath. Only time will reveal whether they will become Olympic champions. Meanwhile they should be inspirations to those of us who cannot swim 5 yards without catching their breath.

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這次呢? -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:39:39

這次看到了!大謝文青付出的辛苦! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:43:00

不知道為啥那個underneath解釋給的例子沒全給出來,在這裏: -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (276 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:44:51

謝謝文青!經你指導,我現在明白underneath和under的區別了!!! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 09:48:01

我汗,我當時報了名,結果一次作業也沒叫。這次看了總結, -cutestream- 給 cutestream 發送悄悄話 cutestream 的博客首頁 (41 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 11:51:44

好,看你下次的傑作啊。看了你上麵的貼,嗯,小溪是個很認真的童鞋! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:09:39

你千萬別打擊我,一聽‘傑作’我就嚇著了。我隻在我的研究領域寫東西還可以, -cutestream- 給 cutestream 發送悄悄話 cutestream 的博客首頁 (43 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:18:32

好,那換個詞,等你的“作業”! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:20:54

剛剛才匆忙翻了一下。對照原文後幫助很大。謝謝你。 -toast2011- 給 toast2011 發送悄悄話 (110 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 11:56:59

我來copy文青從前的解釋:標的紅字的是我覺得用法有問題的,綠的是我覺得要insert或者替代你的紅的翻譯的,黃色highlig -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (753 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:13:39

謝謝美風的熱心!!! 抓住再問,那個原文的錄音一般在?謝謝. -toast2011- 給 toast2011 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:30:34

回複:謝謝美風的熱心!!! 抓住再問,那個原文的錄音一般在?謝謝. -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (150 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 12:35:06

小千的作業在這。翻得很好! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (10683 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 14:57:25

奇怪,怎麽我早上沒看到。我不敢放到主貼去,怕又給弄成blank貼了。小千翻得不錯! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:35:36

我發現原因了:一點你的主帖,不知什麽原因,小千的帖不在裏麵。 -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (69 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:48:23

你們倆,哈哈~我翻譯的好麽?今早起來我都沒敢看!昨晚太困了 -千與.千尋- 給 千與.千尋 發送悄悄話 千與.千尋 的博客首頁 (197 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:49:54

你的好多用詞非常到位。我偷學了好幾個! -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 20:01:37

看到原文是"underwater tricycle race"我確實很開心呀!^v^ -千與.千尋- 給 千與.千尋 發送悄悄話 千與.千尋 的博客首頁 (39 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 20:06:53

Thanks! It was a great learning experience. -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 15:13:40

新聲音翻得很好 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (76 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:41:17

Yes, thank you for pointing that out. -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 17:46:47

I mean, thanks for the correction. -NewVoice- 給 NewVoice 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 17:54:03

You are welcome. thanks for sharing your translation with us. -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 21:03:17

謝謝。很受益。lesson -follower- 給 follower 發送悄悄話 (69 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 15:42:58

完全同意!!!我也深有同感! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 16:36:18

謝謝非文學青年主持的[翻譯寫作]係列,學習了。 -婉蕠- 給 婉蕠 發送悄悄話 婉蕠 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 19:08:02

多謝菲教授和美風助教。辛苦了,周末愉快。 -EnLearner- 給 EnLearner 發送悄悄話 EnLearner 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 21:52:32

我啥也沒幹,都是文青的貢獻。我是專門偷藝滴。 -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:05:02

看你忙上忙下的,沒有功勞也有苦老吧。~ -EnLearner- 給 EnLearner 發送悄悄話 EnLearner 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:25:47

俺為了跟師傅偷藝,端端茶,倒倒水還是能辦到滴。 -beautifulwind- 給 beautifulwind 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 22:32:47

晚來一會兒,美教授和愚教授又在這裏擠兌我呢,愚教授,你等著,我拿板磚砸你去! -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 06/17/2011 postreply 23:24:17

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