The window --- By Diane di Prima

《The Window》

you are my bread
and the hairline noise
of my bones
you are almost
the sea

you are not stone
or molten sound
I think
you have no hands

this kind of bird flies backwards
and this love
breaks on a windowpane
where no light talks

this is not the time
for crossing tongues
(the sand here
never shifts)

I think
tomorrow
turned you with his toe
and you will
shine
and shine
unspent and underground

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 俺的鳥，放這兒～這首爭來爭去的，翻的很過癮～～～喜歡的試試哈：) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 06:52:18

• 看著姑姑的 -marilyn- ♀ (23 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 17:46:40

• 跟著鳥兒的感覺飄～～～；) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:53:05

• 像是描述無望而又難以放下的單戀。等才子才女們來翻譯。 -禾口- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 08:40:32

• 恩，情到深處小怨尤滴味道～～：))) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:53:42

• 譯文參考，放狗 -ephd- ♂ (1780 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 14:35:15

• 哈，翻得挺有詩意，佩服狗， -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 22:14:04

• +1 -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:54:10

• 看不懂這詩，覺得純粹為押韻那，太現代 -sansemao- ♀ (1570 bytes) () 11/15/2015 postreply 22:46:00

• 仿佛不押韻？…喜歡前兩段的翻譯。 -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:55:23

• 沒韻。這首我比較無感，就不容易貼上韻 -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:04:18

• 哦，原詩也沒韻，所以不加韻也挺好的～～我喜歡這首的空靈寂寥：) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:12:39

• 轉得硬，對我來說 -sansemao- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:14:15

• 我正相反，不喜歡韻蜜了、太滑溜兒～～～：) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 05:29:33

• 有時間和姑姑好好討論討論詩歌。以後多上一些。來 -立- ♀ (20 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 01:03:53

• 啵啵啵啵啵啵啵啵～～～ -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 04:55:51

• 看到第一句就感動了.麵包!我今天沒吃早飯. -小小月- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 08:09:55

• bingo!!!!俺是一讀再讀滴喜歡，每次的感動都不同～～～也非常欣賞詩裏的小幽默與撒嬌：) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 10:03:43

• 請給解釋解釋這裏的小幽默和撒嬌，讀著感覺 -立- ♀ (84 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 13:02:08

• 好的，等等我細寫一下對這首詩的理解～：)) -永無鄉- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/16/2015 postreply 19:10:11