Yourface,halfshadedYourface,halfshaded
bysorrow
seededbythepredictedtomorrow
Buttonightisserenaded
bythewordsofyourbeau
thatmakeyourfaceglow
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Slantedlightonashrineinthewall
Ashrineinawall
silentandworn
ignoredbyanomad
Heleansonthewall
anddozesatdusk
Butthedyingsunlight
pulledandslantedbytheshrine
shinesontheshrineandhisface©21hoursago
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Shell
What'sinsideashell
Heavenorhell
Fleshorsoul
Foldandroll
Swirlandtwirl
tillthebirthofapearlvague©5hoursagoLikes:OpenLeapling,shdpoemsOpenLeapling-Lovelyrhyme.Somuchpressurewasputintothatshell.Howlongdoesittaketogetthatpearltocomeforth?Yes,atthestartofitallwhatwasfirstputintotheshelltotransforminto"apearl"Nicelypenned[
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Movingwall
Tunnel
foggyandpitchdark
Abeamoflightbehindcastsmyshadow
ontoawallofwetanddarkair
Ipedalmybiketoescapethetunnel
Butfeartocrashintothismovingwallofhollow
Ibrakemybiketoregainbreath
Onlyseethemovingwallslowdowntodeath
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Mentalist-Wonderfulwaysofexpressionwithbeautyinartcraftwithfineobjectives.
Lovely
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先寫了中文,再英文,加了點
塵埃
窄窄的深巷
孤零零的老茶坊
晚春的殘陽
透過斑駁的木窗
伴著塵埃彷徨
月彎躲進了雲端
夢的門窗緊關
擁著深巷的孤單
清風拂過屋簷
不曾聽到塵埃的呼喊
Dust
Inaslenderandwillow-linedalley
hidesalonelyoldteahouse
Atraceofthesuninlatespring
squeezesthroughthemottledwoodenwindows
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喜歡影子,看照片,經常留意影子,最近看到2張,就碼了幾行字。
Whoseshadowonyourclosedeyes
Whoseshadowonyourclosedeyes
Notmine
Yousaid
It'sthejoyweshared
butneversaid
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Nicelywritten!
Shadowofyourhairs
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Adoorinthedesert
Adoorinthedesert
standswideandtall
alonewithoutattachedwall
Butnoonedarestoavert
becausepeopleseethroughitanoasis
becausepeoplearechasedbyacrisis
Let'slineupandwalkthroughthedoor
Chantsfromthefrontofthecrowd
Whycan'twewalkaroundthedoor
Amurmurfromthemiddleofthecrowd
fromablindman'sblindboar
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What'sgrowingfromlava
It'sthebitterjava
Whogivesthebitterbirth
It'sthecoreoftheearth
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這是網上讀到的,心有戚戚焉
ZenMan1
5/16/201711:08AMPDT
Peopleareveryconfusedthesedaysaboutwhatis"poetry"andwhatisn't.TheModernistexperimentsofthefirsthalfofthe20thCenturyconfusedalotofsemi-literatesouls(likepublicschoolteachers).Linesofemotionallytingedprosewrittenineccentric,disjointedpatternsonapagearenotpoetry.Realpoetryisrootedinsonganddance,buthasanindependentexiste...[
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轉載知乎上一篇比較三人的,比較他們的挺多的,這是少見的抬顧城的,俺是顧城的粉絲,心有戚戚焉,尤其結論,三人裏隻有一個詩人,另兩位是詩歌愛好者,哈哈哈
漫評顧城,海子以及北島
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今天的人,喜歡把顧城,海子,北島放在一起,好像他們有什麽共同點似的.也有把三者歸於朦朧派的,這種分法,[
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