Too wordy, needs to be concise.

來源: beachlver 於 2012-07-17 09:53:15 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (287 bytes)

Also, lots of typos/improper word usage.

What is "dog pool stain"?

"written lease" ?  Just say lease ...

Recommend presenting the itemized cost as a list

Remmember: when communicating with tenants in writing, the less you say, the better.

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