Too wordy, needs to be concise.

beachlver · 2012-07-17 09:53:15Z

Too wordy, needs to be concise.簡介

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回答: 各位高手提建議：房客搬出，給房客寫信要求房子損害賠償。由明開於 2012-07-17 09:04:04

Also, lots of typos/improper word usage.

What is "dog pool stain"?

"written lease" ? Just say lease ...

Recommend presenting the itemized cost as a list

Remmember: when communicating with tenants in writing, the less you say, the better.

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