ZT 036. 英譯杜甫“春望”

36. 春望                  
 
杜甫                 
 
國破山河在，
城春草木深。
感時花濺淚，
恨別鳥驚心。
 
烽火連三月，
家書抵萬金。
白頭搔更短，
渾欲不勝簪。 

36. Spring Scene
 
Du Fu
 
Our country's war-torn, but we have the land,
The capital in spring sees wanton growth.
Blooms can move tears from a heart-broken man; 
Twittering birds can astound parting souls.
 
Three months have now elapsed since the warfare;   
A letter from home is like heavy gold.
Grief has thinned so much of my hoary hair;
Soon my hairpin will have nothing to hold.  

徐英才譯

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