總的感覺是你的th 音有問題(有時候老外也這樣讀,那是在語速快時,且在某種狀況下例如:in the …但你在任何情況下都這樣讀了)。
再就是,你的輔音後加音太多(用紅字標出來了);另外/ i / 和/ i: /要區分開。
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There are many American^expressions about insects -- like bees, for example. Bees^are known^ as very hard workers. They always appear to be busy, moving around^ in their homes, or hives. So you might say you were as busy as a bee if you spent your weekend cleaning your house.