小千老師忙，我正好有空，我來試一下.

總的感覺是你的th  音有問題（有時候老外也這樣讀，那是在語速快時，且在某種狀況下例如：in the …但你在任何情況下都這樣讀了）。
再就是，你的輔音後加音太多(用紅字標出來了)；另外/ i / 和/ i: /要區分開。

 

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