半個十四行: 她

how much i fear to speak
before a thousand eyes
yet, one pair so mystic
eases me with surprise

a thousand ears hear
only two listen
a thousand eyes stare
only two glisten

no soul so true
no heart so pure
no mind so keen
no smile so real

o, what is her name?
she's kindled a flame

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• 期待另一半。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 14:59:28

• haha, it's her turn:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 16:57:02

• 請你轉告她，我在這裏期待。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:14:07

• SHE -北京二號- ♀ (404 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 15:00:20

• beauty or beast, i will remember till the day i die:) -falsetruth- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:04:26

• 請教詩人：“半個十四行詩”和“十四行詩”有什麽區別呀？ -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 15:13:01

• haha, i am glad you asked. 半個十四行詩 is a new form of 十四行詩 -falsetruth- ♀ (780 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:20:57

• 謝詩人詳細專業的回複，我得認真學習。 -紫君- ♀ (69 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:41:08

• 謝謝你的專業水平的提問，我來陪讀。也謝詩人。 -福田- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:45:24

• 福田真謙虛,你的雙語詩歌精彩,詩人也. -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:53:58

• 傻不傻？半個十四行也隱含半個桑那詩人的意思了。 -亦冬- ♀ (146 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:18:28

• 大圓250，存起從不賭，利息0。1，何年當地主？哈哈 -falsetruth- ♀ (8 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:33:36

• 誇你兩句: -亦冬- ♀ (135 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:28:17

• nice, I like it. Nicely ryhmed. You may not believe me -falsetruth- ♀ (401 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 18:43:26

• 反正也是閑著，跟你一個。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (302 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 06:47:49

• -->> with dew her eyes glisten -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 06:54:46

• hahaha 'this line I should undo' is so cute, I couldn't help lau -falsetruth- ♀ (46 bytes) () 11/15/2010 postreply 07:52:40