haha, i am glad you asked. 半個十四行詩 is a new form of 十四行詩

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1. still 14 lines, but only half of the number of syllables. in a standard sonnet, there are a total of 140 syllables, with 10 in each line. but in this new form, there are only 70 syllables, therefore half a sonnet,

2. in the original format, there are 10 syllables in each line, but here, only about half of the lines consist of 5 syllables each, and the other two stanzas are of 6 and 4 syllables in each line. in this sense, half a sonnet,

3. in a traditional sonnet, each line normally is comprised of 5 iambs (unstressed/stressed), but in this new form, only about half lines follow the unstressed/stressed rule, thus half a sonnet,

4. again in the old form, there are 7 rhyming pairs, but here about 3 or 3.5, again half a sonnet

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謝詩人詳細專業的回複,我得認真學習。 -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (69 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:41:08

謝謝你的專業水平的提問,我來陪讀。也謝詩人。 -福田- 給 福田 發送悄悄話 福田 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:45:24

福田真謙虛,你的雙語詩歌精彩,詩人也. -紫君- 給 紫君 發送悄悄話 紫君 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 11/14/2010 postreply 17:53:58

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