Great writing, even the prescription sounds expensive:)

來源: carpediem 於 2010-08-23 11:02:39 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (113 bytes)

Lilac is surely 第一寫手! Very productive.

P.S. A few sentences read redundant. Will discuss them later.

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• 謝謝~請大師不吝賜教,羅嗦是俺的第一毛病,句子結構一直是俺的弱項，還有語病 -lilac09- ♀ 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (10 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 11:23:42

• Perfect practice makes perfect. -- Bruce Lee -carpediem- ♂ 給 carpediem 發送悄悄話 carpediem 的博客首頁 (1711 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 14:00:47

• 大師指教的對,十分感謝~~ -lilac09- ♀ 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (2045 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 14:39:51

• Your modesty impressed me. Did you see Slaving part? -carpediem- ♂ 給 carpediem 發送悄悄話 carpediem 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 15:15:41

• Yes. Bear picked that out too.~ -lilac09- ♀ 給 lilac09 發送悄悄話 lilac09 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2010 postreply 15:42:27

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