【英詩】Flicker in Tender (看圖作文)

	Flicker in Tender How can I hold you in my palm? How can I pretend to be calm? Like a whisper in tender, Softly, is the finest balm. Fingers, elegantly roaming Body, gently rolling Sweet, a kiss in tender Tears, silently roiling…… Watch me dance When you feel low My flare waltzing in brilliance For you I glow! ……then…… Burned up……ashes in calm Cinder, held in your palm Like a flicker in tender Grieving in the ancient psalm.
2010-06-16

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• 哈哈～喜歡Deepwoods的美圖，也來寫首詩，自己都不知道什麽文體 -千與.千尋- ♀ (36 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:21:40

• 那個蠟燭的火焰費了我好大的功夫... ：） -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:22:38

• 蠟燭的火焰製作的很傳神，畫龍點睛之妙。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:38:55

• so beautiful! -清晨咖啡- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 19:58:43

• 謝謝咖啡，我是奶茶～ :) -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:20:24

• 詩美帖雅，音樂動聽。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:17:39

• 又見紫君姐，好親切！ -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:21:04

• 千千小妹，端午節快樂。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:35:07

• 也祝你端午節快樂！ -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:40:46

• 喜歡板板這首candle的詩，把你的詩copy如下 -千與.千尋- ♀ (744 bytes) () 06/16/2010 postreply 20:57:10

• 嚴重客氣了，感激不盡！ -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 17:33:43

• brilliant poem! -好學又好問- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 11:11:54

• 好學又好問MM好！謝謝鼓勵～ -千與.千尋- ♀ (48 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 16:46:57

• 好美啊，充滿了靈氣 -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 17:33:16

• 過獎了，真的過獎了～我不行的。。。 -千與.千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 18:06:07