喜歡板板這首candle的詩，把你的詩copy如下

最喜歡這句——
“life is a game of high and low”
借用了你的"low"，嗬嗬～
為了押韻，找到了“glow”，寫詩真好玩呢！

Poem: For You--The Smallest Candle
Author: Banban
Picture: deepwoods

I am the smallest candle
Always standing in the shadow
Plain, pure, tinted with pink
All I have is a lovely soul

I am the smallest candle
Quitely watching this prettiest show
No one ever paid attention to me
But hey, life is a game of high and low

I am the smallest candle
Beauty is what your eyes behold
I wait for another lovely soul
Who deems me special, head to toe
I will burn into the brightest flare to catch those eyes
Oh Come and celebrate me
The smallest candle of all

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• 嚴重客氣了，感激不盡！ -板板- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/17/2010 postreply 17:33:43