how about

Mountains chilly, paths steep
Cottages nestled deeply into the white clouds
the evening glow is casting the autumnal woods
the maple leaves goes brighter than the red spring flowers
My carriage stops and I forget to go~

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• he evening glow is casting on the autumnal woods -deepwoods- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/13/2010 postreply 09:02:53

• ok, 喜歡這種討論，深木 新同學~ :) -lilac09- ♀ (557 bytes) () 06/13/2010 postreply 09:23:53