回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks.

來源: swater 於 2010-05-16 13:18:06 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (283 bytes)
回答: To Mywedding---the final version 由 swater 於 2010-05-16 10:22:08

Thanks for nice comments, Eagle.

It can be improved in many ways, like "occasion" replaced with "ceremony", "get old" with "grow old", and "warm" in the end line with "caring".

Hopefully, Mywedding will notice these modifications in the final printing.

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• 回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ 給 Mywedding 發送悄悄話 (306 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 13:25:45

• 回複：回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Swater- ♂ 給 Swater 發送悄悄話 (88 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 15:31:48

• 回複：回複：回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ 給 Mywedding 發送悄悄話 (50 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 20:33:33

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