回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks.

Thanks for nice comments, Eagle.

It can be improved in many ways, like "occasion" replaced with "ceremony", "get old" with "grow old", and "warm" in the end line with "caring".

Hopefully, Mywedding will notice these modifications in the final printing.

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• 回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ (306 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 13:25:45

• 回複：回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Swater- ♂ (88 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 15:31:48

• 回複：回複：回複：回複：great translation. i like it very much. thanks. -Mywedding- ♀ (50 bytes) () 05/16/2010 postreply 20:33:33