俠客， 少了一節是愛沒了。我本不想壓韻，既然俠客請求， 我就加點韻吧

來源: bearsback 於 2010-05-09 18:48:27 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (433 bytes)
回答: 兩日不見妹， 熊心皆已碎 由 bearsback 於 2010-05-09 11:34:55

wind cracks, waves splash and wheels grind
almost all travelers have got on board
a listless bear lies there with a blank mind
as now the ship is being unanchored

for two days no birdcall has been heard
though the bird once promised the voyage
the rusting leaves yet carry no word
the drifting bottle contains no message

will the bear survive the heartbreak
if the dream voyage they will not make?

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• 改得很漂亮。倆個版本同樣喜歡。 -忘俠- ♂ 給 忘俠 發送悄悄話 (38 bytes) () 05/09/2010 postreply 19:03:26

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