Can something hang horizontally?

Guess not, and so vertically hanging seems redundant.
My try:

星垂平野闊 "Flat fields so boundless with stars hanging low"

月湧大江流 "The great river flowing with the moonlight shimmering in it"

btw, 牆should be 檣.

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• great, i learned, master carpe;) -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 04/10/2010 postreply 13:54:06