=== My cape of many dreams ===
I drifted off into daydreams......
There were blue leaves, crystal trees, and pink sunbeams
阿美 jumped cross green streams,
with a cape on her shoulders of many dreams...
這算詩麽?哈哈~我的處女作!歡迎大家砸!
我寫的這個東西是"詩"麽?
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• 至少算兒歌 -ryu,- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 19:50:18
• 講講,為什麽說是兒歌呢?謝謝高人啦! -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (12 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 19:59:26
• 別生氣。我兒歌都不會。你比我強多了。樓下的 -ryu,- ♂ (42 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 20:09:28
• 哪有生氣呀,寫詩挺好玩的,以後我會常寫,嘻嘻~ 大家多多指教! -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/19/2010 postreply 20:11:29
• 應該算詩,我喜歡。小千姐姐一定常寫喔! -葉紫荊- ♀ (106 bytes) () 02/20/2010 postreply 15:10:25
• 嗬嗬~什麽是梨花體?什麽是Sonnet呀? -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2010 postreply 18:43:32
• 祝賀小千的第一首英詩,寫得好。音樂:追夢人 Dream chaser: -紫君- ♀ (338 bytes) () 02/20/2010 postreply 16:54:19
• 謝謝紫君,好美的音樂,聽著耳熟~ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/20/2010 postreply 18:44:12