我寫的這個東西是＂詩＂麽？

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=== My cape of many dreams ===

I drifted off into daydreams......
There were blue leaves, crystal trees, and pink sunbeams
阿美 jumped cross green streams,
with a cape on her shoulders of many dreams...

這算詩麽？哈哈～我的處女作！歡迎大家砸！