Walking Across the Atlantic

I wait for the holiday crowd to clear the beach
before stepping onto the first wave.

Soon I am walking across the Atlantic
thinking about Spain,
checking for whales, waterspouts.
I feel the water holding up my shifting weight.
Tonight I will sleep on its rocking surface.

But for now I try to imagine what
this must look like to the fish below,
the bottoms of my feet appearing, disappearing.

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• What a nice surprise! -北京二號- ♀ (296 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:29:48

• WOW~look~ who's this! How are you? long time no see! -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:35:05

• Hug 小千和二號！！ -XTXD- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:44:31

• I miss all of you too, but -xtxd- ♀ (271 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:37:48

• 好詩美誦。也喜歡你配的背景音樂。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:31:41

• 謝謝紫君！ 背景音樂的名字是 Ocean -XTXD- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:46:44

• wow, 又一位世外高人，是不是閉關才回來？ -selfselfself- ♂ (16 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:49:47

• 萬不敢當高人，普通人想練習提高英語。 -XTXD- ♀ (44 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 17:01:56

• 嗬嗬，師傅，我瞧您越有趣：自來熟之招您也會啊？hiahia -veggiedoggie- ♀ (22 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:53:27

• typo：not 之，這 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:54:09

• 嘿嘿，不跟你說了麽，互相學習 -selfselfself- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:56:33

• 您很牛，我很菜，那還有什麽互相呀？您謙虛得我都困了。 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:59:52

• 要不這麽著，我去拜lilac做師傅學寫作，順便也給你弄個 -selfselfself- ♂ (17 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:01:35

• lilac是我姐，我姐年輕漂亮著呢，你說“婆婆”還帶個“祖”，是個什麽意思啊？嘿嘿 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (88 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:05:00

• 沒準人家願意呢， -selfselfself- ♂ (16 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:07:40

• 我叫我姐叫得一臉zhe子，我代表我姐表示很不願意。 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (189 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:13:41

• 不是我叫，是你叫，我都暈了，該爬走睡覺了。 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:14:24

• 好讀好詩！ -eyeyey- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 16:54:43

• 謝謝eyeyey! 一起努力 -XTXD- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 17:03:33

• 男人完了 -doitthen- ♂ (121 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 18:08:23

• 我們不行了，你們就隨便吧。 -tack- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 18:49:44

• 我老了。希望寄托在你們年輕人身上 -doitthen- ♂ (26 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:16:24

• 您老的謝詞來的好遲，我還以為大家都躲著呢。 -tack- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 19:32:21

• 沒等謝你時，你就無影無蹤了。 -doitthen- ♂ (54 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:14:28

• D老，我們加在一起都比不上你，我們是小兵，你是軍長！ -小千...千與千尋- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/25/2010 postreply 12:55:16

• Good work, artistic reading ! -天澤園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 18:19:13

• 我在最後頂你，到你的blog的裏聽了好幾篇，很牛啊，PF一個。 -veggiedoggie- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:01:52

• 念的真好。。。 -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/24/2010 postreply 20:19:40