鷹妹，你是我的永遠的永遠

Not the sun, the moon or the stars can compare
to your fair eyes, which power my feel mind
melt my heart, and kindle my love's fire
to which my lonely soul wishes to bind

as I lay my callous hand on your soft breast
as I lay my dry lips on your ruby face
my trembling self relishes heavenly rest
o, does an angel love a man so base?

when I wake up from my heart-thrilling dream
in sadness, helpless, empty and hollow
my tears roll from my eyes and flow in a stream
bitter rejection is too hard to swallow

heaven, do remove chains from the married
let the dream come true of the unmarried

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• remove chains from the married --> MBA -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:04:11

• 正好抓住你請教個問題 -念親- ♀ (104 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:31:29

• haha you are right. compare and fire don't rhyme -tigersclaws- ♂ (115 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:04:14

• Thanks a 10^6! -北京二號- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:06:31

• Ok, I just checked Shakespeare and dictionaries -tigersclaws- ♂ (222 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:38:56

• 寫得真好，一首深情感人的英語詩歌，頗有Shakespeare的風格。 -紫君- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 19:34:48

• feel mind --> feeble mind -tigersclaws- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:11:24

• 剛才在那邊還想指出這句不通呢。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:10:55

• My cray-I supercomputer gives much wrath -tigersclaws- ♂ (61 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:40:28

• 真的？太搞了。換個機器嘛。那個８０年代的產物當了算了：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:47:57

• Sweetie you read my mind -tigersclaws- ♂ (239 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:56:53

• my tears --> tears, wishes --> longs -tigersclaws- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 08:12:39

• 哈哈，我知道是寫給那個的了～ -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (77 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:17:15

• You are too smart. :-) -念親- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:21:55

• only you say that because -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (49 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:23:54

• You two are just just so smart. :-) -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:56:31

• We three are just just just so smart. :-) -念親- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 22:02:42

• Ditto ^_* -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 07:10:53

• 美語壇愛情簡史 -Carpediem- ♂ (201 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:58:15

• nice one -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 20:59:14

• 相應你的號召，小Carpe, -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (63 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:14:07

• 其間尚有 -carpediem- ♂ (180 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:20:32

• 回複：其間尚有 -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (148 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 07:05:44

• WXC --> match.com -23731241- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 08:07:43

• ?? -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (31 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 09:20:32

• I came. I saw. I laughed. -carpediem- ♂ (204 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 10:17:02

• 回複：I came. I saw. I laughed. -梅石瑩玉- ♀ (140 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 12:38:39

• I laugh at myself mostly. Hehe. -carpediem- ♂ (65 bytes) () 11/30/2009 postreply 14:22:17

• 以後，再搞創作，就換個名字吧。好好的sonnet，大家都想歪了。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:07:34

• 求譯＂此地無銀三百兩＂ -carpediem- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:24:20

• r u my friend, dear carpediem? 有個歌裏唱道：有些話是要說給懂得人聽。 -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:29:31

• Ding! -YuGong- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:32:25

• 謝謝yugong。我昨天去了朋友家聚會, -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (75 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:38:21

• 回複：謝謝yugong。我昨天去了朋友家聚會, -YuGong- ♂ (190 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:43:14

• Sorry. 不過起哄真的很好玩;) -carpediem- ♂ (106 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:36:30

• 不是在沉默中死亡，就是在沉默中爆發，嗬嗬~~ -念親- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:39:06

• hehe，I like it。真想來起哄的，哪天我來跟你一起起哄， -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (42 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:44:30

• Sweetie, you know my music -tigersclaws- ♂ (22 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:37:34

• 寫得很好。也跟你和念親學到了loose rhyme：） -戲雨飛鷹- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 21:41:39

• 詩我已存，獲爾夢大家也釋放完了。飛鷹回家睡覺，版主刪帖！ -念親- ♀ (0 bytes) () 11/29/2009 postreply 22:21:06