回複：回複：中國大學教學質量是世界一流嗎？

不好意思，本人絕對半桶水，就喜歡挑挑刺：

When making a judgement or evaluatoin, one needs to have a set of criteria. If criteria are different, we are very difficult to reach a consensus.
( 探討1：an evaluation?，　2：we are very difficult? 這是中國英語，it's difficult 好點）
The academic success is not a warrant for one to succeed in business. Talents have different forms.
It is not rare that a straight A student in a prestigious college will be successful in the future.
（3，這裏前麵說全A學生時不絕對（not rare)，後麵卻用will,　will 就是很絕對的意識，不搭，用CAN比較搭。）
It simply reflects his or her hard work during college. If he or she wants to excell in the future, one needs strive to engage him/her in the new battle.
A was is comprised of many battles, and life is full of wars:)...
(4，life is full of wars? war是大戰役，就是很多人死磕，感覺還不如fights,一個人搞)

Even if one is successful in achieving all As in the college.
(5，不帶THE：in college)

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• En, thanks -灰衣人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2009 postreply 01:24:29

• I need more practices:) -灰衣人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2009 postreply 02:37:02