回複：親愛的波影:能公開你的秘密嗎?

沒命MM, 謝你的表揚！我都臉紅了。文中有好幾個錯誤：
1.making me a day: making my day
2.what name it is: what its name is
3.he hadn't got yet: he hadn't given one yet
4. when I tried first a little bit: I first tried....
5. when he dose: when he does
6. please see another direction：please see another shot
希望版主能給幫助該過來。另外，多用形容詞是初級寫作，高級的寫作應該多用並列句，排比句。比如：as bueatiful as..., as well.... and so on.

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• 對不起，叫錯你名了， 應稱你明MM, 請原諒！ -水波藍影- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/28/2009 postreply 11:11:34