另一學生答grep， 仿李唐

來源: 雲霧山中 於 2009-01-07 18:12:26 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (598 bytes)

My king, you raised the white flag on wall,
In a deep palace, how could I hear the call?
hundred thousand soldiers, all laid down arms,
Not even one was manly enough to stand tall.


附：李唐譯

The king had raised on wall the flag of truce,
And I in palace deep had heard no news.
When fourteen thousand all disarmed at front,
Not even one was manly brave to count.

翻譯是按十音一句，五步抑揚格（iambic pentermeter），臨行韻腳。


> (北宋) 費花蕊夫人

君王城上豎降旗,
妾在深宮那得知?
十四萬人齊解甲,
更無一個是男兒.

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• 很好。 -grep- ♀ 給 grep 發送悄悄話 (14 bytes) () 01/07/2009 postreply 18:34:24

• 還有，第一句的說話對象不對 -李唐- ♂ 給 李唐 發送悄悄話 李唐 的博客首頁 (68 bytes) () 01/08/2009 postreply 07:44:11

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