五絕二首 & A Short Poem

《夢》平水韻

(一)

京民皆閉戶，巷口為誰開？
吹我梅花笛，知音化雪來。

(二）

無聲人合十，仰對漫天灰。
青鳥悠悠下，銜來一剪梅。

作者： 紉秋蘭


“Dreams”

Stuck midstream,
I kept hearing the river roar---
That's the kind of dream
I can afford no more.

Fighting upstream,
The river kept hearing me roar---
That's the kind of dream
I'm living for.

--- 藍靈

 

 

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• "吹我梅花笛，知音化雪來。" "青鳥悠悠下，銜來一剪梅。" 梅花笛喚來了知音和一剪梅！兩首五絕相映成趣，很有創意！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:02:26

• 小西星期五晚上好！深有同感！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:05:22

• 藍靈晚上好，謝謝藍靈和秋蘭的好分享！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:17:49

• “吹我梅花笛” 此君愛梅若愛妻。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:48:17

• 胡同寂寂，一聲笛，萬片雪。作者開出了意境，開出了天地。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:50:48

• ‘’巷口為誰開？‘’ 京居之無奈，京民之自閉，令人太息長太息。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:53:56

• “知音化雪來”。壓軸精采，我最陶醉這一句，無知音處得知音。冬雪，冷而不冷漠。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:10:33

• 不冷漠，便見溫情，便見人情，便見人間有情。天若有情天亦老，怎會呢？ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:12:34

• 灰濛濛的京空，就有一隻青鳥（“青鳥殷勤為探看”的青鳥），悠然而降，帶來一剪梅。這，不期然地聯想到 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:16:04

• 那一隻在洪水滔天之後銜來橄欖枝的鴿子。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:17:41

• 好聯想！讚文化底蘊～～ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:48:37

• 盈盈周末好！感謝勵言！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:57:31

• 藍靈解析得好。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:26:07

• 此君紉詩如紉蘭。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:58:46

• “Fighting upstream, The river kept hearing me roar, -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:05:40

• That's the kind of dream I'm living for." -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:06:31

• Keep dreaming this dream, 藍靈！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:08:36

• And the dream of getting stucked in the midstream was just a -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:10:13

• bad dream. You survived :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:14:18

• Yes, I did survive a nightmare. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:31:02

• "Stuck midstream? Change horses" is a phrase -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:14:56

• from a 2001 article in Medical Economics by D Grandinetti. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:15:48

• The article is about not getting stuck in work. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:16:58

• Good to know. Thanks for sharing. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:20:28

• My pleasure. Actually, I learned it from 紉秋蘭. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:23:15

• Thank you both! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:31:15

• I always appreciate your kind words. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:31:56

• His quotes were inspiring. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:33:31

• +100086 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:56:21

• No work is satisfying unless and until you make it so. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:36:31

• I remember this line from "A Tale of Two Cities": "When they -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:38:56

• took a young man into Tellson's London house, they hid him -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:39:43

• somewhere till he was old. They kept him in a dark place, -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:40:38

• like a cheese, until he had the full Tellson flavor -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:42:31

• and blue mold upon him." This was someone stuck midstream. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:43:51

• 藍靈是愛讀書之人，讓人欣賞！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:51:38

• Right, it was a bad dream. No one likes to -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:27:37

• get stuck midstream, just as no one likes to be caught -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:28:33

• in a quagmire. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:29:14

• The nightmare will eventually end. Pat pat… -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:55:48

• It was a desperate situation. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:31:58

• Let it go.Hug! The key word is HOPE! Never give up. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:53:24

• Thank you for cheering on me during this game. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:26:16

• Life is the name of the game. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:26:42

• Life is not a game. Still, in this life, we choose the -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:04:40

• games we live to play. —— J.R. Rim -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:06:09

• Life is but a dream. Yes, let's live on and dream on. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:11:19

• That's the fighting spirit, my fighting spirit. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 21:23:46

• You are a brave soldier, aren’t you? Go 藍靈！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:54:18

• This was an upstream battle. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:09:57

• You're so brave, and you can win the battle! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:15:44

• Hahaha! I have battle scars to prove it. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:18:24

• A Galatian "bore in his body the marks of warfare," -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:20:59

• which is a biblical reference, by the way. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:21:33

• I believe you. Save you a trip to show me the evidence :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:22:32

• I was employing a rhetorical device. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:25:19

• You might want to take it as a figure of speech. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:26:22

• Okay, I believe you again :) -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:29:29

• Thank you! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:31:19

• Thank you, 藍靈，goodnight. Have a great weekend! -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:33:32

• 小西, you have a great weekend! -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/16/2024 postreply 20:39:24

• 吹我梅花笛，知音化雪來; 青鳥悠悠下，銜來一剪梅。---Love it! 有意境有情感！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 04:00:58

• 暖冬周末好！紉秋蘭這幾句，我也非常喜愛，覺得難忘。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:20:48

• 這幾句確實好！清新脫俗，秋蘭的詩詞別具一格，讓人拍案叫好。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:34:42

• 字淺意深而遠。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 08:00:00

• 問暖冬mm新年好。回美國了嗎？ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:39:38

• 盈盈mm，我回美了。給你拜個晚年！美壇東西越來越多，目不暇接了！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 12:33:55

• 回拜晚年。歡迎回來。期待你的佳作！：）） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 19:30:20

• 藍靈的英文詩也很棒，stuck in midstream, fighting in upstream -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 04:03:52

• your dream never dies but is alive! 詩寓意好，makes us relay. 讚！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 04:05:28

• As for life, it might well be an upstream battle as much as -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:27:45

• an uplifting odyssey. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:29:49

• BTW, fish instinctively fight their way upstream against -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:31:21

• the current. Sink or swim. Future is at stake. -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:34:40

• SWIM for sure! For the bright future. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 07:09:02

• 感謝暖冬鼓勵！拙作是有感而發的。某天看香港“南華早報”，入目是這個社論標題： -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:24:06

• ‘’Stuck midstream in the river of reform‘’ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:25:42

• 即興而作。好雅興！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:41:25

• 網閱“南早”，多知一點“出口轉內銷”的消息。“南早”是馬雲旗下的唯一英語報刊，現在還是否，不得而知。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 08:05:10

• 藍靈有才，涉獵廣泛！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 08:26:14

• 其實呢，全拜言論自由，資訊自由之賜。 -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 09:30:57

• 藍靈的英文小詩，雋永！用詞，意境俱佳。優秀的作品！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 06:38:12

• 謬讚了。再謝盈盈！ -藍靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/17/2024 postreply 08:06:01