"goes" in Seidel's poem means "moves around", I think. In your poem, it means "goes away", right?
Creative idea and nice poem!
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• Yes, you got it! My "goes" is "goes away". -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 09:18:05
• Go兄,我剛才把中文版加上了,就更容易理解了。 -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 09:55:10
• Thank you for your nice comment and encouragement. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/26/2024 postreply 09:55:59