咬字好清晰,聽得好清楚。花費最長時間寫的歌卻不是最好聽的歌,感覺一直一個調兒:)交作業:

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It's a still-life watercolor
Of a now-late afternoon
As the sun shines through the curtain lace
And shadows (wash  )the room
And we sit and drink our coffee
Couched in our indifference
Like shells upon the shore
You can hear the ocean roar
In the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
The borders of our lives
And you read your Emily Dickinson
And I my Robert Frost
And we note our place with book (markers  )
That measure what we've lost
Like a poem poorly written
We are verses out of (rhythm )
Couplets out of rhyme
In syncopated time
And the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
Are the borders of our lives
Yes, we speak of things that matter
With words that must be said
Can ( analysis )be worthwhile?
Is the theater really dead?
And how the room has softly faded
And I only kiss your shadow
I cannot feel your hand
You're a stranger now unto me
Lost in the dangling conversation
And the superficial sighs
In the borders of our lives

 

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+1, PPR, 我最近再唱sound of silence感到自己發聲進步不用使勁擠了,Paul的發聲還挺難學的 -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:30:48

實話實說,寫歌的靈感比花費的時間更重要~我怎麽找半天找不到PPR的意思。他們的發聲共鳴很好,也恭喜你更會發聲了~ -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:41:38

在一片和諧的叫好聲中,專門唱反調兒 PPR=party pooper ,笑坦發明 -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:47:45

There is another one similar: wet blanket. -甜蟲蟲- 給 甜蟲蟲 發送悄悄話 甜蟲蟲 的博客首頁 (104 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:12:01

哈哈,第一次聽這個詞,學習了。我一直覺得兼聽則明:) -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 10:30:18

他們? 我從來沒聽到過Garfunkel 的聲音 -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:49:51

還真有PPR這個詞,笑壇的英文水平夠高啊,哈哈:)沒聽過Garfunkel的聲音?那麽好聽的和聲難道是一個人唱的? -妖妖靈- 給 妖妖靈 發送悄悄話 妖妖靈 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:57:37

我說他自己單獨發聲,很難聽出來 -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:09:22

Bridge Over Troubled Water and For Emily are two of his solo -甜蟲蟲- 給 甜蟲蟲 發送悄悄話 甜蟲蟲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 11:42:58

不對吧? sound of silence 是garfunkel 唱主旋律的啊。 -甜蟲蟲- 給 甜蟲蟲 發送悄悄話 甜蟲蟲 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:50:09

Sure? I will check again, I thought always Paul Simon -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:02:16

Some their well-known songs were sung by him. -甜蟲蟲- 給 甜蟲蟲 發送悄悄話 甜蟲蟲 的博客首頁 (178 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:07:46

Really confuses me, just found 2 of their concerts live, -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:19:47

Paul lead both singings anyway/gad 2 c'em reunited @old age -移花接木- 給 移花接木 發送悄悄話 移花接木 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:20:24

Yes. It's confusing. I have to listen very carefully to tell -甜蟲蟲- 給 甜蟲蟲 發送悄悄話 甜蟲蟲 的博客首頁 (68 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 09:35:20

also like sound of silence, can't sing but tried it on KB. -最西邊的島上- 給 最西邊的島上 發送悄悄話 最西邊的島上 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 07:43:30

讚作業,great job! 挺好聽的歌呀。我喜歡演唱者的腔調! -盈盈一笑間- 給 盈盈一笑間 發送悄悄話 盈盈一笑間 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 01/24/2024 postreply 08:50:45

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