Recalling A Snowing Feast. 憶雪 (and one more)

【七律】憶雪

 

 

夢馭洋風海水寬，西行不易返東難。

重門鎖處青春遠，瑞雪飛時廣宇寒。

嶺上梨花連陌白，窗前瓊屑與腮乾。

紅梅掛樹心香滿，指與鄰家小妹看。

 

 

Recalling a Snowing Feast

 

Dreaming of riding the ocean's wind

over its wide water to travel back and forth.

It was difficult to go westward back then.

Returning eastward is even harder.

 

Youth is far away after the doors

of the past closed down one by one.

I still remember that vast world vividly

where the auspicious snow flew around me.

 

The pear blossoms whitened the mountain

range first, then spread to the field below.

Outside the window snowflakes were glittering,

like the tiny crystals on her cheeks after they dried.

 

The red blossoms bursting out on the plum tree

filled my heart with fragrance.

Pointing to them I called out the girl

next door to witness their beauty.

 

【五絕】賞雪

 

片片自天涯，翩翩落玉紗。

音符幽且淨，飄作雪絨花。

 

Joy of Snow

 

Every snowflake comes

from the faraway world.

Piece by piece,

more and more.

No fall is more graceful.

 

While flying,

musical notes,

quiet and pure,

turn into edelweiss.

 

(© January 20, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 重門鎖處青春遠。。指與鄰家小妹看。。清新，自然，接地氣。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 13:47:09

• 翩翩落玉紗。Piece by piece, more and more. No fall is more grace -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 13:59:47

• 這一句翻譯，還有一處英文倒裝，都挺不錯。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 14:10:29

• Youth is far away after the doors of the past closed down -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 13:55:39

• I still remember that vast world vividly where the auspicio -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 13:56:05

• 讀英文版，能幫助我更好理解七律的內在涵義。：） -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 13:57:24

• 這個有好有壞，壞處是限製了讀者自己的想象 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 14:13:31

• “紅梅掛樹心香滿，指與鄰家小妹看”+1，你的古詩裏常常寫景又寫人，情景交融。人才是萬物的中心，非常喜歡！ -暖冬cool夏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 18:11:56

• 謝謝喜歡，謝謝鼓勵！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/21/2024 postreply 12:05:35

• 雙語詩都很棒，富有想象力，更喜歡第二首，謝謝分享！ -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/20/2024 postreply 23:16:29

• 謝謝小西鼓勵！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/21/2024 postreply 12:07:35

• 感動。。。 。。。人生就是這樣走啊走啊，走到現在。。。“指與鄰家小妹看”。 -Oona- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/21/2024 postreply 05:45:50

• 謝謝來讀及留評 -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/21/2024 postreply 12:08:41