Metaverse of Mysteries

Metaverse of Mysteries

Behind each door, a world unseen,
A realm of mystery, realms between.
Once entered and closed it, wonders began to shift,
In a labyrinth of enigmas, souls adrift.

Thousands of doors, infinite they may,
Familiar and curious, in their display.
Old or new, each a lure and a call,
In our metaverse, mysteries enthrall.

On shelves they stand, a spectral array,
Inviting spirit of wisdom with our stay. 
Wondering which door where we lost?
Swimming through secrets, we will find the way.

Yet, amidst the metaverse, at least one door I knew,
A flash to where your essence once flew.
At random, yet guided by fate, 
I opened it, not a moment too late :+) ~~~~~ 

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和朋友逛舊書店隨感練筆！~~~~ 

 

 

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• Very well-written with thoughtfully conceived ideas! -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 17:59:31

• Every book is like a door to the unknown, old or new -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:00:20

• A twist in the last stanza, like it :) -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:01:53

• If drawing a dragon, that should be the eyes. glad you -遍野- ♀ (47 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:01:16

• The dragon eye :) -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:07:08

• :+)) -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:35:02

• Somehow, this poem reminds me of an audio book I recently -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (56 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 18:13:41

• 謝謝您喜歡！started from the idea of a palace, but -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:17:50

• But it is too concrete, so think of ‘metaverse of mysteries’ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:19:38

• Then a book as a door to unknown mysteries, -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:23:00

• The bookstore is a local house, very unique/antique style -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:25:44

• Thanks for sharing your thought process! -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:48:39

• We like to visit old bookstores too. -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:49:54

• Every city we went, we checked out some old bookstores :) -甜蟲蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:50:22

• A flash to where your essence once flew. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:29:44

• The poem is enchanting.Full of imagery that captivates soul -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (167 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 19:31:16

• 謝謝盈盈！希望如您所說。剛剛學寫，還在找感覺。。。請多賜教！！～～～～ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 20:06:39

• There areMany possibilities before realized in only one way. -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 21:18:40

• Absolutely!~~~~ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/13/2024 postreply 22:16:46

• beautiful, taste like sonnets -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 10:17:45

• 嗬嗬，謝謝顫音鼓勵！sonnets多了兩行：）～～～～～ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:39:44

• Intriguing! If you just started, you're already skillful! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 11:52:41

• 謝謝G 詩友！英文詩剛開始學寫。不過中文古詩詞新詩都寫了好多年了。其實都一樣，需要的是感覺一下英文的韻律 -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:44:09

• Excellent rhyming～ -妖妖靈- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 17:34:15

• 謝謝您來讀！祝冬安！～～～ -遍野- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/14/2024 postreply 18:55:45