having friends makes every day the same short but longing

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• 起承轉合，此處轉得漂亮。既呼應了前麵的long 和short, 又升華了全詩的意境～～ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 08:09:56

• You got it! Thank you for your nice comment. -CBA7- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/23/2023 postreply 09:16:23