Feelings under the Mid-Autumn Moon

Feelings under the Mid-Autumn Moon

 

Tonight hanging over America is the full moon,

borrowing thousands of rays from the sun

that is over Asia in the high noon.

 

China and America are two places at their own height.

The moon and the sun are just one light

by which people in both places are shone upon.

 

There the day is already short.

Here the night is still long.

 

I miss my old friends,

wish again we're hand in hand.

But who misses me, and who has

turned his hometown into a foreign land?

 

【七律】中秋月下感懷

 

今夜美洲懸滿月，借來萬縷自東陽。

神州北美為雙地，玉鏡金輪本一光。

日照故人天已短，月明新客夜初長。

吾思舊侶誰思我，誰把家鄉作異鄉?

 

(© September 29, 2023, godog)

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• Wish everyone a very Happy Mid-Autumn Festival! -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:24:39

• 神州北美為雙地，玉鏡金輪本一光。。海上生明月，天涯共此時。。異曲同工之妙。。 -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:29:34

• China and America are two places at their own height. -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:30:33

• The moon and the sun are just one light by which people in -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:30:50

• both places are shone upon. 欣賞學習。中秋快樂！ -盈盈一笑間- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:31:23

• 謝謝盈盈。中秋快樂！ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 21:36:30

• 讚雙語詩！ -66的山梁- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/29/2023 postreply 22:28:23

• Sentimental and profound. This is excellent! -waterfowl- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 02:32:09

• 好詩 -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 09:50:00

• 提讀：） -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 09:50:00

• Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing! -方外居士- ♂ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 13:17:49

• 報告一下下，我先斬後奏了，已經把Go博的譯文私自追加到我的拙文，追加一個感謝！ -古樹羽音- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 16:21:42

• Well done on both languages. -亮亮媽媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/30/2023 postreply 19:04:44

• 讚應景的雙語詩！ -衛寧- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/01/2023 postreply 19:24:21